What change would make your hometown more appealing to people of gore age. Use specific reasons and example to support your opinion.

Okhaldhunga is my home village, the mount Everest of Nepal, as well as one of the beigest V D C village of Nepal. With the dramatic economic growth, Okhaldhunga attracts more and more young people of my age to come here, work and live in this village, which in full of live, but their are still some unpleasant aspects, which I would like to change in Oder to make my home village more appealing to people of my age. First of all there are not as many foreign companies and joint ventures as in shanghai. As many people know, shanghai is a lot of young people’s favorite city to work and live because it has more opportunities and chances. Compared to shanghai, okhaldhunga, the political, economical and cultural center of okhaldhunga has less foreign companies. Young people of many age usually have good foreign language skill and would like to practice them during work. They thank it is a good chance to improve their language skill in foreign companies and joint ventures. Another aspect in which I could like my village to change is by constructing more roads. Although our gourmands already has put a lot of forts n city construction. It is still mot good enough. You will see traffic congestions everyday during rush hours. People are not always sure of reaching their dos Imation without being late. For young people like me, who have just started working, being on time is very important. But with the police problem we are caching everyday, we definitely will spend more time waiting and earn net awed being late to work and important business appointments. Although my village okhaldhunga is a very loudly gene. Full of chances, I would like to change some as pacts to make it more appealing to people of my age I would like big foreign companies and joint ventures to move in to or village so that we can practice foreign language sill and I would like to have good roads that will strengthen our transportation system thus we will be able to work more efficiently.